Here is my redrafted VMV proposition.  Following your advice Heike Philp I have tried to make it less generic...hopefully I am getting closer to the mark.  I am working on the business proposal now and see that the VMV proposition is an important part of it so I neet to get it right :-)  Editing permissions have been given!  Please feel free... Any feed feedback gratefully accepted as always.
Lisa Wood you did it!!!! This is it. This is fantastic and I can clearly read your approach. Highly unique, highly innovative and EXCELLENT. I am so proud of you.
ReplyDeleteHeike Philp Yay!!! At last.... It has been hard work getting there but I finally made it and learnt a lot in the process... ;-) Thanks for the feedback. Onwards and upwards...
ReplyDeleteLike you say, Lisa, this is a cutting-edge approach: Appealing and challenging at the same time. Sounds like a very professional endeavour. Wish you the best, you really deserve it!
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